The bones in the corner, the many, many bones in the corner, strewn across the middle of the floor, or piled against the far wall, testified to just how many had stood before this wall. Some were broken. Shattered. Some already turning to dust. I wondered which belonged to Dan.
I picked up a shattered...femur maybe? and searched for a space to carve my own name. When I finished, I could barely read it. When I was finished, no one would ever know I'd been here.
MC Howe, I really like your addition of bones to give this the creepy haunting effect that echoes in the statement that no one would know you'd been there.
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ReplyDeleteThe bones in the corner, the many, many bones in the corner, strewn across the middle of the floor, or piled against the far wall, testified to just how many had stood before this wall. Some were broken. Shattered. Some already turning to dust. I wondered which belonged to Dan.
ReplyDeleteI picked up a shattered...femur maybe? and searched for a space to carve my own name. When I finished, I could barely read it. When I was finished, no one would ever know I'd been here.
Hi MC Howe! This is great, creepy. I was hoping someone would incorporate "Dan" into a piece. He wanted to be noticed!
ReplyDeleteOh, MC Howe this says so much in so few words! Beautifully done. And, the creep factor speaks to me. ;)
ReplyDeleteMC Howe, I really like your addition of bones to give this the creepy haunting effect that echoes in the statement that no one would know you'd been there.
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